Post by .:Alex:. on Dec 9, 2010 18:13:19 GMT -5
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Nourish this flame its been built on the ones we hate
Name
Age
Gender
Ethnicity
Religion
Sexuality
Never knowing a last cry destined to bleed
Character Description - Based on occupation, skills, looks, qualities, etc.
Character Abilities - Strengths, weaknesses, attacks, etc.
Character Alignment - Good, Evil? Chaotic, passive? Etc.
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History - In depth please, anything that’s smaller than 4 paragraphs is rejected.
Gates of fire come back brutality beat down
Role play Sample - This is required of all new members.
Just kill the lights I just can't wait
Personal Information (Not mandatory)
Name- Nicknames are acceptable
Where can we contact you? Do not post your contact information unless you want people to see it.
Where did you find us?
What are you going to be bringing to the forum?
If your application is horrible it will be denied. And to keep it very simple here's an example of a bad bio.
Shane Tyson
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Nourish this flame its been built on the ones we hate
Name Shane
Age 20
Gender M
Ethnicity White
Religion Athiest
Sexuality Straight
Never knowing a last cry destined to bleed
Character Description - He's a dark character. Evil by nature and generally dresses in dark clothing.
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History - Shane grew up in the Bronx of newyork. He learned how to sword fight in a dojo after his parents were killed by demons. He is on a personal vendetta to kill every demon he possibly can. He travels a lot and ended up somewhere south of the US were he learned the craft of voodoo. He has ever sense been fighting all that is evil while posing as one of them.
Gates of fire come back brutality beat down
Role play Sample - Shane draws his sword a smirk on his face he runs at the demon holding his swrd over his head and strikes it down on the demons shoulder. the turn in his heel allows him to move more closely to the other gaining demons where he cuts them down a well. "Foolish..." He says sheathing his sword and walking away.
Just kill the lights I just can't wait
Personal Information (Not mandatory)
Name- Mikkey
Where can we contact you? Msn
Where did you find us?
What are you going to be bringing to the forum? Roleplay I guess
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Why is that so bad? The inability to read the descriptions which pretty much state that you need to put more than a paragraph in your history. The fact that he used the old, "My character is dark and creepy." Route when describing him. The constant usage of the word 'He' to start each sentence in the bio. The run on sentences and lack of punctuation. Misspelled words, and lack of information.
Please don't post something like this.
Thank you,
Admin
Character Name
Character Image
Nourish this flame its been built on the ones we hate
Name
Age
Gender
Ethnicity
Religion
Sexuality
Never knowing a last cry destined to bleed
Character Description - Based on occupation, skills, looks, qualities, etc.
Character Abilities - Strengths, weaknesses, attacks, etc.
Character Alignment - Good, Evil? Chaotic, passive? Etc.
---
History - In depth please, anything that’s smaller than 4 paragraphs is rejected.
Gates of fire come back brutality beat down
Role play Sample - This is required of all new members.
Just kill the lights I just can't wait
Personal Information (Not mandatory)
Name- Nicknames are acceptable
Where can we contact you? Do not post your contact information unless you want people to see it.
Where did you find us?
What are you going to be bringing to the forum?
[center]Character Name[/center]
[center]Character Image[/center]
[size=4][b]Nourish this flame its been built on the ones we hate[/b][/size]
Name
Age
Gender
Ethnicity
Religion
Sexuality
[size=4][b]Never knowing a last cry destined to bleed[/b][/size]
Character Description - Based on occupation, skills, looks, qualities, etc.
Character Abilities - Strengths, weaknesses, attacks, etc.
Character Alignment - Good, Evil? Chaotic, passive? Etc.
---
History - In depth please, anything that’s smaller than 4 paragraphs is rejected.
[size=4][b]Gates of fire come back brutality beat down[/b][/size]
Role play Sample - This is required of all new members. Even if you’re invited. Veteran members do not have to fill this out. Please give us at least a 2 paragraph sample of your role play ability. Pick a scenario and be creative.
[size=4][b]Just kill the lights I just can't wait[/b][/size]
Personal Information (Not mandatory)
Name- Nicknames are acceptable
Where can we contact you? Do not post your contact information unless you want people to see it.
Where did you find us?
What are you going to be bringing to the forum?
If your application is horrible it will be denied. And to keep it very simple here's an example of a bad bio.
Shane Tyson
Character Image
Nourish this flame its been built on the ones we hate
Name Shane
Age 20
Gender M
Ethnicity White
Religion Athiest
Sexuality Straight
Never knowing a last cry destined to bleed
Character Description - He's a dark character. Evil by nature and generally dresses in dark clothing.
---
History - Shane grew up in the Bronx of newyork. He learned how to sword fight in a dojo after his parents were killed by demons. He is on a personal vendetta to kill every demon he possibly can. He travels a lot and ended up somewhere south of the US were he learned the craft of voodoo. He has ever sense been fighting all that is evil while posing as one of them.
Gates of fire come back brutality beat down
Role play Sample - Shane draws his sword a smirk on his face he runs at the demon holding his swrd over his head and strikes it down on the demons shoulder. the turn in his heel allows him to move more closely to the other gaining demons where he cuts them down a well. "Foolish..." He says sheathing his sword and walking away.
Just kill the lights I just can't wait
Personal Information (Not mandatory)
Name- Mikkey
Where can we contact you? Msn
Where did you find us?
What are you going to be bringing to the forum? Roleplay I guess
-------
Why is that so bad? The inability to read the descriptions which pretty much state that you need to put more than a paragraph in your history. The fact that he used the old, "My character is dark and creepy." Route when describing him. The constant usage of the word 'He' to start each sentence in the bio. The run on sentences and lack of punctuation. Misspelled words, and lack of information.
Please don't post something like this.
Thank you,
Admin